12/28/2007 1:16:43 PM

/message_topic.aspx?topic=507834

12/28/2007 1:21:45 PM

this is totally different

12/28/2007 1:24:36 PM

All Hail Aww Hell

12/28/2007 1:36:38 PM

better than i expected

12/28/2007 2:14:45 PM

this was a freestyle over a beat i made - this was also the MC's first time doing this, so I'm pretty excited about the future.

12/28/2007 3:21:49 PM

ttt

12/28/2007 9:21:54 PM

quantize is your friend

12/28/2007 9:28:12 PM

ill try that

12/28/2007 9:29:13 PM

I was thinking Duke Nukem... totally disappointed

12/29/2007 1:56:37 AM

MIC RHYMED WITH MIC



HORRIBLE

12/29/2007 2:00:20 AM

I thought it was gonna be cool, then he started rappin'.

12/29/2007 2:22:31 AM

bunch of haters
at least JayB listened to it ... you other two are just bots without pics of yourselves.

[Edited on December 29, 2007 at 12:16 PM. Reason : .]

12/29/2007 12:15:18 PM

well,

to be honest,

it does suck

12/29/2007 12:16:39 PM

well to be honest
i didnt ask you
and no it doesn't suck, it's a freestyle.
his first one.
and he has a great delivery considering he pulled off like 5 minutes of
fairly well delivered material, after 7-8 min of unrecorded material i missed.
with pen and paper this could go somewhere.

12/29/2007 12:18:41 PM

if you put this up in a thread

you're asking for opinions.

dont get riled up when you see one that doesn't stroke the cock of your supposed creativity.

12/29/2007 12:20:31 PM

I know a handful of people who are quite good at freestyling to anything at any time.

this fellow isn't on the team.

12/29/2007 12:24:05 PM

if u get a different rapper, and get someone else to write beats, i could see it going somewhere

12/29/2007 12:24:22 PM

Wow, that was awful.

What the fuckin kind of whack beat is that? Seriously, this is terrible.

12/29/2007 12:32:34 PM

suxs

[Edited on December 29, 2007 at 12:36 PM. Reason : simon says you arent going to Hollywood]

12/29/2007 12:35:21 PM

just because you see something beautiful does not mean you have to try and destroy it.


let's hear your musical endeavors...maybe you are all lightyears ahead of me and can give me

constructive criticism

12/29/2007 12:36:34 PM

i guess i missed something

12/29/2007 12:37:32 PM

must have
you look cut out to be a garbage man
not a music critic

12/29/2007 12:39:06 PM

what the fuck is that even supposed to mean?

12/29/2007 12:39:52 PM

"im coming through on the microphone
usb headset"

i can freestyle too:

im waching basketball
typing on the computer
it has a usb port
and a firewire port too

12/29/2007 12:40:09 PM

^ post your songs then.
let's hear it big talker.

12/29/2007 12:40:37 PM

oh look

he edited out his shit talking to me again

xsmp, you're the biggest vagina on the internet

12/29/2007 12:42:00 PM

then come fuck me stud

12/29/2007 12:42:56 PM

i just did.

heres my new jam:

im sipping on my coffee
it just burnt my tongue
just before i drank some water wrong
and it went into my lung

12/29/2007 12:42:56 PM

12/29/2007 12:43:57 PM

just because you see something beautiful does not mean you have to try and destroy it.

12/29/2007 12:44:25 PM

ha
i was looking but saw nothing
nothing but a troll that is

12/29/2007 12:44:58 PM

12/29/2007 12:45:15 PM

another one!

12/29/2007 12:45:40 PM

ok

12/29/2007 12:45:42 PM

I thought this thread was about Ash Williams and the Evil Dead series.

12/29/2007 12:46:02 PM

12/29/2007 12:46:40 PM

^^i love that series of movies
they actually poked ash with sticks to get him to scream in genuine pain

12/29/2007 12:47:09 PM

12/29/2007 12:47:35 PM

SLOTHY SAD

12/29/2007 12:48:04 PM

he just heard the "song"

12/29/2007 12:48:50 PM

LULZ

12/29/2007 12:49:21 PM

this is gonna be just like


now i need a new mic...hey pilgrimshoes wanna come to the music store with me?
there's a nice old man I want you to meet.

12/29/2007 12:51:58 PM

sure!

12/29/2007 12:52:28 PM

sweeet. you can be my primary investor.

12/29/2007 12:52:53 PM

pass!

12/29/2007 12:53:33 PM

turn my headphones up

12/29/2007 12:53:41 PM

^that was on last night





btw here are the charts standings for this song since yesterday when i posted it

Quote :

"Hail to the King # 421 in HipHop (highest position was 421). Total songs: 1,200,230 # 23 in Freestyle (highest position was 23). Total songs: 65,837 "

thanks for the support.

12/29/2007 12:54:14 PM

12/29/2007 1:06:56 PM

Quote :

"I thought this thread was about Ash Williams and the Evil Dead series."

me too

haha wtf when did xsmp get all nooby? wtf did he think was gonna happen when he posts shit like that in here, a bunch of dudes trying to congratulate him and circle jerk

12/29/2007 1:39:01 PM